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Feed on my new hub - Bee Pollen.

  1. Richard Nieh profile image83
    Richard Niehposted 18 months ago

    Hi,

    I have written a new hub regarding rare bee Pollen from Taiwan, Rhus Javanica. Please read it can give me any feedback that I can improve. Highly Appreciated your help.

    http://hubpages.com/health/Rare-Healthy … s-Javanica

    Dr. Richard Nieh

    1. DrMark1961 profile image91
      DrMark1961posted 18 months ago in reply to this

      I guess your hub has still not passed QAP. If you are interested in doing so, and want your hub seen by more people, you really need to get rid of those Wikipedia links. If I do not know what an enzyme is I can look it up (or, if you feel it is really important that I understand the word, you can leave a short description in parentheses.)
      It is an interesting hub.

      1. Richard Nieh profile image83
        Richard Niehposted 18 months ago in reply to this

        Great I will try to unlink it.

    2. NateB11 profile image93
      NateB11posted 18 months ago in reply to this

      Informative, well-researched and interesting Hub. I think the main problem is that it has numerous grammatical errors. It would help to have it proof read and have errors corrected.

      1. Richard Nieh profile image83
        Richard Niehposted 18 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you. Unfortunately, no one I know can really help proof read it, they are all busy and not interested in blogging. I am doing this on casual basis anyway and I cannot write a hub if I am busy. However, whenever I have time, I will come back and write a few pieces.

 
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