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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Help children to keep their rooms tidy

  1. Elsie Hagley profile image79
    Elsie Hagleyposted 16 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Help children to keep their rooms tidy. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Farawaytree profile image89
      Farawaytreeposted 16 months ago in reply to this

      Hi Elsie. Just a few quick ideas. I would add some more photos to your hub that are relevant to your topic. I would also edit the subtitles, and add "How to help children keep their rooms tidy" for example, as a subtitle. I would also direct the hub entirely towards adults as I doubt any kids will read it. Also I would take the poll out of the middle of the hub and add it at the end.

      I hope that helps somewhat!

      Good luck smile

  2. Elsie Hagley profile image79
    Elsie Hagleyposted 16 months ago

    Thanks, I have updated it with a new video (which I think might have been the problem, it was an advertising sales video ad), add another photo, see what happens now.

    1. Millionaire Tips profile image88
      Millionaire Tipsposted 16 months ago in reply to this

      I read the introductory capsule, and you have a lot of run on sentences and some grammatical errors.  You should re-read the hub and maybe run the words through a grammar checker to catch for those. I think you mean "rant" not "ramp".

 
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