Hello Experts: Please Judge this Hub

  1. birthdaywish profile image78
    birthdaywishposted 11 months ago

    Hello Experts of the Hubpages community. I know my skill as a writer is not that high. That is why I am seeking your help to be better. Please, judge my hub and give me your valuable suggestions.

    1st Birthday Wishes, Messages and Quotes

  2. Elsie Hagley profile image82
    Elsie Hagleyposted 10 months ago

    It's nice to have a large picture at the top of the hub, not a small one.
    All the quotes are written for the parents of the child, how many mothers give a one-year-old a card?
    Try writing some for the grandparents, other family members or friends giving a young child a card or present.
    Just some ideas I hope that will help you get it featured.