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I'd like feedback on my Hub: 'Learning to Drive' A romantic story told in a way

  1. Leftmefeeling profile image61
    Leftmefeelingposted 11 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 'Learning to Drive'  A romantic story told in a way that reflects real life. Film review 2015 (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. innerspin profile image89
    innerspinposted 11 months ago

    Hello Leftmefeeling,

    You need to research Hubpages more to understand what is expected of a hub. Under 100 words is simply not enough. Go the learning center for advice, and read hubs by other people.

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image93
    FatFreddysCatposted 11 months ago

    ^^ What Innerspin said. This is waaaaayy too short.

  4. Leftmefeeling profile image61
    Leftmefeelingposted 11 months ago

    OK, thanks for the feedback, I only made it less than a 100 words because the counter kept going down so I presumed wrongly that it was like Twitter and you only had so much space to write your content.

    Thank you for the feedback, I will go and look at the FAQ's.

    Thanks for the response.

    1. gerimcclym profile image83
      gerimcclymposted 11 months ago in reply to this

      I enjoyed reading your film review. Looks like an interesting film!
      To answer your question, the third paragraph appears to be one long run- on sentence. I encourage you to break it up into two or more sentences for the sake of clarity. I hope this helps.