I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub http://hubpages.com/relationships/Dear-Pepe-the-Great
It's an open letter to a very important person in my life. I want it to be one of the Christmas gifts I am going to give him.
This would mean so much to me if it passes the Quality Assessment Process as well as to him. I am sure it will make him extremely happy.
What can I do to improve?
Please send me feedback and I will sincerely appreciate it.
While I appreciate the sentiment behind this hub, it is not really the sort of piece HP is looking for, i.e. standalone articles that will attract external traffic. Is there a better place for you to publish this, as it is so personal? You could put it on Facebook, maybe?
Have you used copyright free, Creative Commons licensed images?
Thanks for the comment, I do appreciate it much. Yes I know it's a bit personal but I was hoping it can be featured here. I also had a bit of personal posts already featured here... so I was really hoping this one would too :-)
If not, then yes maybe I will just need to publish it somewhere.
I took the images from morguefile where it is free to use their pictures.
Thank you so much theraggededge, I was worried no one would comment here.
I think it's a lovely gesture to create a sort of online thank you card. What about making a standalone webpage using something like wix.com or wordpress.com? You would at least have control over the formatting and make it look more like a card or letter. HP's format is more for articles. And as raggededge says it's probably not going to pass QAP given its personal nature. Best of luck with it!
I don't understand who "Pepe the Great" is, and therefore do not understand what this hub is about.
I suggest you read the following section in the Learning Centre
http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/publ … d_22732041
wow i read this and i can feel pepe the greats presence right here in my room it's giving me spine tingles. don't give up!
This work is a collection of sentences and I have no idea of what Pepe even is.
Perhaps your thoughts come like that, so you may consider making it into a poem.
Your thoughts are also all over the place and unfocused, almost like you are trying to put everything you can into this piece of work.
It has a lot of potential and I can feel your passion for the subject in the words.
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