I'd like feedback on my Hub: DIY Facial Cleanser

  1. Karishmapall profile image61
    Karishmapallposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub DIY Facial Cleanser (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 12 months ago in reply to this

      Make it longer. You don't explain what to do once you have mixed the two dry ingredients together. It just ends. No instructions what to mix it with, or how to use it.

      Perhaps include more than one DIY cleanser? What about a moisturizer as well?

      Change your i to I all the way through. Get rid of the exclamation marks - they don't belong in factual pieces.

      1. Karishmapall profile image61
        Karishmapallposted 12 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you so much! Yes i was thinking of that as my next article smile
        ill improve the errors. thank you

 
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