I'd like feedback on my first Hub: Personal Training Mistakes

  1. FitClubSolutions profile image82
    FitClubSolutionsposted 17 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,
    I am a newbie here. This is my first hub ever. I really appreciate your feedback! Here is the link Avoid Worst Mistakes Any Personal Trainer Can Make

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 17 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there. Welcome.

      It's quite interesting and probably useful to people in your profession.

      You need to break up that text into separate text capsules and add more images to provide interest. You could squeeze in a poll too to encourage reader participation. You have two large images right at the beginning, which makes the Hub top-heavy. Make the first one half size and move to the right, and put the other further down the page.

      Some of your paragraphs are a little too big, so break them up too. The idea is to have an article that looks good on any device.

      Go easy on the exclamation marks; it's easy to overdo them and they do nothing to improve your writing.

      Get rid of the link to the Occupational Handbook. Once the Hub is approved and featured, you can add it back in if necessary.

      http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

      Good luck.

      1. FitClubSolutions profile image82
        FitClubSolutionsposted 17 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking time to look through my post

 
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