I am new to writing articles and I would really like some feedback on my articles. Thank you!
I read your Rough, Annoying, Obnoxious Days hub It's quite nicely done. There are a few grammatical mistakes that you can easily fix by running through Grammarly or some other checker.
What I would suggest is that you break up your paragraphs so that the length of them varies. Online writing needs a bit of white space to rest the reader's eyes and keep them moving down the page. Being faced with a big block of text, especially on a phone or tablet is overwhelming.
You might be able to rewrite one or two paragraphs as bulleted lists - that will break it up even more and makes the article look attractive and inviting.
I checked out your RV article since I, also, have a niche on that topic. Nicely done, really! I would be careful about photos, however, Make sure you attribute them properly, even if they are your own. I think you will do well here. Your Hubber Score is already better than most, so keep up the good work!
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