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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Religion and Philosophy

  1. markeleazer profile image73
    markeleazerposted 16 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Religion and Philosophy. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Jesse Drzal profile image87
    Jesse Drzalposted 16 months ago

    Your paragraphs are really chunky. Just kind of reads likes a big run on sentence with a bunch of commas. Some grammar issues as well. Hope this helps. Keep at it!

    1. paradigmsearch profile image89
      paradigmsearchposted 16 months ago in reply to this

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      I like you. But you really need to be <snipped> with.

  3. Jesse Drzal profile image87
    Jesse Drzalposted 16 months ago

    I like you too, paradigmsearch.

 
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