I'd like feedback on my Hub: Social Anxiety It's All in the Head

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    Priyanka kumarposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Social Anxiety It's All in the Head (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Oztinato profile image83
      Oztinatoposted 7 months ago in reply to this

      in my view the hub's title is amateurish. Why not "the causes of social anxiety"? Currently it's an abrupt and uninformative title.
      Secondly the hub is way too short. It needs to be about 20 times longer.
      Thirdly the hub reads like a rambling bunch of personal thoughts and not like a carefully thought out presentation. It's just a weak personal opinion. You need to research and add some science.

    2. theraggededge profile image93
      theraggededgeposted 7 months ago in reply to this

      It won't be approved with that unrelated link. If you think that writing at Hubpages is a way to promote your business, I'm afraid you are incorrect.

      To make it better:

      Remove the link.
      Cite your professional qualification, or relate your personal experience of mental health issues.
      Break up the text into several modules.
      Have your grammar checked.
      Add an image (copyright free or used with permission).

      Hope that helps.