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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Separation Anxiety Disorder in Children.

  1. arunrajv profile image61
    arunrajvposted 7 months ago

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub http://hubpages.com/health/Separation-A … n Children. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    http://hubpages.com/health/Separation-A … n-Children

  2. psycheskinner profile image83
    psycheskinnerposted 7 months ago

    Those links do not work

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image94
    FatFreddysCatposted 7 months ago

    Sez "no longer published."

    1. arunrajv profile image61
      arunrajvposted 7 months ago in reply to this

      hi, done again, seems am not getting through the Quality assessment, plz help and advice on any changes to be made

      1. Will Apse profile image90
        Will Apseposted 7 months ago in reply to this

        It is such a sensitive issue I reckon you would need to be either an expert, or offering some insightful personal experience to get a page accepted.

  4. calculus-geometry profile image85
    calculus-geometryposted 7 months ago

    You have some grammatical errors.  For example, this sentence

    "Extreme anxiousness to the point that sometimes causing physical illness."

    One possible correct version is

    "Extreme anxiousness can reach the point of causing physical illness."

    Find a friend who is fluent in English to proofread your articles or try something like Grammarly.