Constructive feed back on my hub An Overview Of Dog Diarrhea And Home

  1. sandeep15r profile image80
    sandeep15rposted 15 months ago

    Hello fellow Hubbers,
    I want constructive feedback on my hub, An Overview Of Dog Diarrhea And Home Remedies. This hub is already published and has good visits. I'm seeking feedback on my syntax and readability so that I can write with more clarity. 

    PS: I want to write with simplicity and clarity.

  2. psycheskinner profile image81
    psycheskinnerposted 15 months ago

    I think your title is a bit misleading because in the whole, lengthy hub, there is one rather vague paragraph about home remedies.

    Also one of you pictures, on a hub about domesticated dog, is of an African Wild dog which is a completely different species and a wild animal.

    Other than that the hub is okay.  But I would strengthen the recommendation to see the vet to any serious or protracted symptoms or distress of the animal--not just when they are clinically dehydrated.

    1. sandeep15r profile image80
      sandeep15rposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      Thanks for  sharing your feedback. I have noted your points and incorporate them soon. Please give me some suggestions about my syntax - how I can improve it.

 
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