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I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Road The GOP Leaders Must Travel

  1. Peoplebranch profile image66
    Peoplebranchposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Road The GOP Leaders Must Travel. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Barbara Kay profile image85
      Barbara Kayposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      I didn't have time to read the entire hub, but I did notice that you didn't start new sentences when you should have. There may be other issues, but that is all I found.

      1. Stacie L profile image86
        Stacie Lposted 15 months ago in reply to this

        Yes,I agree with Barbara. There are long, run-on sentences that need to be broken up.
        Also some articles are missing so proof read.
        Break up paragraphs with capsules. Make  headlines in bold.
        add images and videos.

        1. Peoplebranch profile image66
          Peoplebranchposted 15 months ago in reply to this

          Thanks Stacie!

      2. Peoplebranch profile image66
        Peoplebranchposted 15 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks much for the feedback, I appreciate your time

 
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