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Friendly Critique on my Hub? Will be glad to do the same in return!

  1. Sparrowlet profile image92
    Sparrowletposted 13 months ago

    Posted this a few days ago and no comments yet, though there have been many readers. It's frustrating to know people are reading your hub, but you have no idea if it is enjoyed or not! I will gladly return the favor, just post here what you thought of my hub and if you have a preference for which hub of yours you would like me to read! Thanks in advance:

    http://hubpages.com/literature/Hilda-Co … ing-Poetry

    Katharine

  2. Jodah profile image87
    Jodahposted 13 months ago

    I loved your Hilda Conkling hub. I can't understand why it didn't have more comments.
    I would be honoured if you would reciprocate by commenting on my hub: http://hubpages.com/literature/If-I-Cou … -Love-Poem

    1. Sparrowlet profile image92
      Sparrowletposted 13 months ago in reply to this

      John, nice hub! congrats on your success with your poem! The only thing was, it was momentarily confusing at the end. maybe put the bit about the competition before the announcement of the winner? And explain that you participated in the competition, so it is more obvious that you were the WINNER! Very beautiful song, too.

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        Jodahposted 13 months ago in reply to this

        Ok thanks. I will take a look at that and make some changes.

 
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