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I'd like feedback on my Hub: WING BOARDING – THE NEXT ULTIMATE ADVENTURE?

  1. AalokSK profile image59
    AalokSKposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub WING BOARDING – THE NEXT ULTIMATE ADVENTURE? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      A lot of copy & pasted text, mostly from news articles like this one: http://www.dailymail.co.uk/sciencetech/ … plane.html and this one: http://flightclub.jalopnik.com/wingboar … 1638960471

      1. You shouldn't plagiarize other websites.
      2. Google will ignore it in favor of the originals.

      http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

    2. Say Yes To Life profile image88
      Say Yes To Lifeposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      It's a bit short.  You may want to add cross training requirements, safety precautions, where and when its typically done, etc.  Also, at one point, you say "perdon" instead of "person".

  2. AalokSK profile image59
    AalokSKposted 15 months ago

    Thank you! I will try to do my best from next time smile

 
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