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I'd like feedback on my Hub: What Causes Armpit Rash?

  1. Enoch Kane profile image78
    Enoch Kaneposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub What Causes Armpit Rash? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 14 months ago in reply to this

      I see a few issues that might need correcting.

      It's keyword stuffed. You've used 'armpit' 69 times, 'rash' 55 times, 'area' 33 times. You've used the word 'swells' when you mean 'swellings'. You have used 'we' throughout the text which is incorrect. You repeat information throughout, then you've added a summary which repeats it all again. You add sources to each section of information - as long as it is completely written in your own words, there is no need to include them. You can add a couple of live links to your main sources by using a link capsule.

      You've omitted some basic treatments such as medicated powder and frequent washing. You also suggest lemon applied to a rash... I'd like to see your reaction if someone applied pure lemon to your raw and sore rash - ouch!

      There are also some grammar, spelling and sentence structure problems, but they are minor and could be dealt with by an online grammar checker.

      1. Enoch Kane profile image78
        Enoch Kaneposted 14 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks very much for the advice, I will work on them an republish it

      2. Enoch Kane profile image78
        Enoch Kaneposted 14 months ago in reply to this

        Is there any software to assist check and correct the errors

        1. theraggededge profile image95
          theraggededgeposted 14 months ago in reply to this

          You are a writer - you are supposed to research and locate the information you need. Google will help you. Just search for 'free grammar checker'.

        2. UnnamedHarald profile image94
          UnnamedHaraldposted 14 months ago in reply to this

          Any software that cranks through an article and corrects errors for you will end up producing easily identified garbage that you will have to rewrite anyway.

          1. Enoch Kane profile image78
            Enoch Kaneposted 14 months ago in reply to this

            Thank you very much

 
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