I'd like feedback on my Hub: Why do I Keep Getting Pimples at the Same Spot

  1. Enoch Kane profile image77
    Enoch Kaneposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Why do I Keep Getting Pimples at the Same Spot. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Rupert Taylor profile image95
      Rupert Taylorposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      There are several issues.
      Capitalizing in sub-heads is haphazard e.g. Why do you keep having Recurring Pimples?

      "Pimples are a skin disorder that occurs ..." should be occur
      "you might notice that a pimple on your chick seems ..." are you referring to a girlfriend, poultry, or cheek?
      "most at times the face being attacked by pimples" Doesn't make sense, it probably means that most pimples appear on the face.
      By now, I've lost interest in the article because there are so many grammar mistakes that your credibility as an author is compromised.

      1. Enoch Kane profile image77
        Enoch Kaneposted 15 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks very much for the advice, I would correct them and re-post it

 
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