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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Benefits of Planting Some Plants in Our Garden

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    Eunilda Carpioposted 9 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Benefits of Planting Some Plants in Our Garden (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image93
      theraggededgeposted 9 months ago in reply to this

      Don't really get the 'hidden' part. It doesn't work with the title. Either you are planting them, or they are already 'hiding' in the garden, which is it?

      'Sight' not 'site'.

      Some grammar issues. Try reading it aloud - you may pick up on some of the glaring errors.

      Who is your ideal reader? A gardener, a non-gardener or a healer? Once you have decided who they are, write the hub for them.

      Get rid of the unrelated spammy link. Your hub won't be approved unless you delete it.

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        Eunilda Carpioposted 9 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks, I really appreciate it.

    2. Justin Breeze profile image81
      Justin Breezeposted 9 months ago in reply to this

      First of all, good on you for having the humility to seek improvement on your work. I'd start with the title, how about "Unique Benefits of Planting a Garden"

  2. relache profile image86
    relacheposted 9 months ago

    After reading this Hub, I feel the author has zero actual experience with gardening or growing plants of any kind.

 
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