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Need Feedback for Hub

  1. SehRish Goher Ali profile image85
    SehRish Goher Aliposted 8 months ago

    I'dlike to get feedback for my hub Drinking water at the right time gives more benefits than just hydrating

    1. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 8 months ago in reply to this

      Title's too long and should be in title case, i.e. Important Words Begin with a Capital Letter.

      How about "Optimal Times to Drink Water" or "Benefits of Drinking Water at the Right Time"?

      HTH.

      1. SehRish Goher Ali profile image85
        SehRish Goher Aliposted 8 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for the suggestion...

  2. Anna Marie Bowman profile image91
    Anna Marie Bowmanposted 8 months ago

    While the information contained in the hub is helpful, and you have a good deal of information, there are a lot of grammatical issues with the hub.  I found it difficult to read due to this.

    1. SehRish Goher Ali profile image85
      SehRish Goher Aliposted 8 months ago in reply to this

      Thanks for your feedback...I will edit it again.

 
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