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Need Feedback for Hub

  1. SehRish Goher Ali profile image87
    SehRish Goher Aliposted 12 months ago

    I'dlike to get feedback for my hub Drinking water at the right time gives more benefits than just hydrating

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 12 months ago in reply to this

      Title's too long and should be in title case, i.e. Important Words Begin with a Capital Letter.

      How about "Optimal Times to Drink Water" or "Benefits of Drinking Water at the Right Time"?

      HTH.

      1. SehRish Goher Ali profile image87
        SehRish Goher Aliposted 12 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for the suggestion...

  2. Anna Marie Bowman profile image92
    Anna Marie Bowmanposted 12 months ago

    While the information contained in the hub is helpful, and you have a good deal of information, there are a lot of grammatical issues with the hub.  I found it difficult to read due to this.

    1. SehRish Goher Ali profile image87
      SehRish Goher Aliposted 12 months ago in reply to this

      Thanks for your feedback...I will edit it again.

 
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