I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Beautiful One

  1. randslam profile image85
    randslamposted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Beautiful One. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image92
      theraggededgeposted 8 months ago in reply to this

      Ah, so sad. Deepest sympathies. Dona certainly was 'the beautiful one'.

      You've got it in a strange category "Books for teens and adults/Young adult fantasy/The Harry Potter Series" That will prevent it being featured. You have to move it to Poetry.

      You might consider playing around with the layout. Perhaps add an introduction to explain the poem. Check your spelling (bussy/busy). Get rid of 'smile emoticon'.

      1. randslam profile image85
        randslamposted 8 months ago in reply to this

        Good tips...thanx...didn't even realize I wasn't in Poetry. smile

 
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