I'd like feedback on my Hub: How to lose belly fat quickly at Home?

  1. smartit69 profile image61
    smartit69posted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How to lose belly fat quickly at Home? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 months ago

    First thing I notice is the headline should be in headline face i.e. capitalize words except short conjunctions etc.
    Then there's a stray cap in the first sentence " best way to Reduce belly fat." It crops up elsewhere.

    Apostrophes are a problem "wont" is won't, "its" is it is of it's, "cant" is can't.

    Your illustration needs to be credited to its source, which appears to be a blog on losing belly fat.

    Finally, there doesn't seem to be anything original in the content. It's mostly repetition of information available in a thousand different places.