I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Filipino Tattoo Art

  1. Gener Benter profile image81
    Gener Benterposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Filipino Tattoo Art. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image93
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 months ago

    There are several grammar issues with this hub. Here are a couple of examples:

    "However, the advent of Christianity and modern civilization began the to change the attitudes of the Ifugao's and other tribal community about the tattoo.on their body."

    Should be began to change -

    Ifugao's  - in this case it is not possessive so the apostrophe is wrong

    other tribal community -  should read other tribal communities

    about the tattoo.on their body - about the tattoos on their bodies. An errant period got in there also.

    "But, tattoo resurfaced as a form of art and not as a sign of symbol for some unknown powers ..."

    tattoo resurfaced - tattoos resurfaced

    not as a sign of symbol  - not as a symbol of (word duplication)

    There are several other grammar problems and none of the illustrations are properly credited.

    1. Gener Benter profile image81
      Gener Benterposted 5 months ago in reply to this

      My special thanks for your time in improving my blog. More power to you, Rupert. I highly appreciate your effort.