I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Filipino Tattoo Art

  1. Gener Benter profile image83
    Gener Benterposted 13 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Filipino Tattoo Art. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 13 months ago

    There are several grammar issues with this hub. Here are a couple of examples:

    "However, the advent of Christianity and modern civilization began the to change the attitudes of the Ifugao's and other tribal community about the tattoo.on their body."

    Should be began to change -

    Ifugao's  - in this case it is not possessive so the apostrophe is wrong

    other tribal community -  should read other tribal communities

    about the tattoo.on their body - about the tattoos on their bodies. An errant period got in there also.

    "But, tattoo resurfaced as a form of art and not as a sign of symbol for some unknown powers ..."

    tattoo resurfaced - tattoos resurfaced

    not as a sign of symbol  - not as a symbol of (word duplication)

    There are several other grammar problems and none of the illustrations are properly credited.

    1. Gener Benter profile image83
      Gener Benterposted 13 months ago in reply to this

      My special thanks for your time in improving my blog. More power to you, Rupert. I highly appreciate your effort.

 
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