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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Job hopper's life

  1. cloudysky profile image59
    cloudyskyposted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Job hopper's life. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. LouCannon profile image81
      LouCannonposted 7 months ago in reply to this

      Hi -- I am just having a quick look through and a couple things are popping out at me... hope these suggestions work for you!

      1. Over use of same / similar words in a short span
      2. Very long paragraph - could be broken up into two or three smaller ones
      3. I find a small photo close to the top that really captures what your Hub is really about seems to work nicely to help engage readers

      Lou Balmain

      1. cloudysky profile image59
        cloudyskyposted 7 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for the feedback.
        Will definitely use your advice in improving the quality of my hub

        1. LouCannon profile image81
          LouCannonposted 7 months ago in reply to this

          It's got decent bones -- just needs a little bit of added touches... I almost always have to go back and 'pretty' mine up smile

 
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