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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Did you know that Cinnamon is great for deterring g

  1. Toni Byrd profile image60
    Toni Byrdposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Did you know that Cinnamon is great for deterring garden pest? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. tlcs profile image79
      tlcsposted 14 months ago in reply to this

      Have just read your hub. More content and pictures. Then I would say you may have smashed it! Trudy

      1. Toni Byrd profile image60
        Toni Byrdposted 14 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you

    2. psycheskinner profile image80
      psycheskinnerposted 14 months ago in reply to this

      Your hub says absolutely nothing about using cinnamon in the garden.  That is like offering someone a cookie tin with no cookies in it.  Confusing, at best.

      1. Toni Byrd profile image60
        Toni Byrdposted 14 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you..

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image91
    FatFreddysCatposted 14 months ago

    Your first photo is watermarked, which is a no-no.

    "Pest" in your title should be "Pests."

    Your title suggests that you will be offering tips about how to use cinnamon to control garden pests, but there's no mention of cinnamon or its uses at all in the accompanying article.

    The Hub consists mostly of large photos and very little copy. You will need to increase your word count.

    1. Toni Byrd profile image60
      Toni Byrdposted 14 months ago in reply to this

      Thank you so much for the advice..

 
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