I'd like feedback on my Hub: An Addiction Story

  1. jobsmart profile image72
    jobsmartposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub An Addiction Story (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 14 months ago in reply to this

      Two problems stand out: your misuse of punctuation. You can easily correct it by studying an online guide - just do a search. The other thing is your tendency to split every sentence into its own paragraph.

      HTH

      1. jobsmart profile image72
        jobsmartposted 14 months ago in reply to this

        Thanx i'll correct it...

 
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