I'd like feedback on my Hub: Intrapersonal or Self-Communication, Conflict & Var

  1. Sulabha profile image82
    Sulabhaposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Intrapersonal or Self-Communication, Conflict & Variables. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 14 months ago in reply to this

      Fascinating hub. At first I assumed you were writing about 'thinking'. You don't mention that at all, but surely our thoughts must play a part in intrapersonal communication?

      Anyway, I'll just pick you up on one thing and that is 'hanged herself to death'. All you need to say is that she hanged herself. It's a given that if someone hangs themselves, they are dead.

      1. Sulabha profile image82
        Sulabhaposted 14 months ago in reply to this

        Dear theraggededge,
        Hanged herself. Hmm, yes of course you are right! It was truly silly of me to make this mistake.
        And, yes I should have used the word'thinking' somewhere. I will do it now.
        Thanks a lot.

 
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