I'd like feedback on my Hub: Everything You Need to Know About Getting Dental Wo

  1. NoSoyBraulio profile image61
    NoSoyBraulioposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Everything You Need to Know About Getting Dental Work in Mexico (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Tom Groves profile image86
      Tom Grovesposted 3 months ago in reply to this

      I think it looks very good. I still have a lot to learn myself, but your layout is impeccable, you have good grammar, and the hub has a good level of substance.

  2. Chatty Chat profile image84
    Chatty Chatposted 3 months ago

    Keep an eye on your sentences.  A lot of them are too wordy and don't make sense. 

    "On the top of that, the difference of the value of the dollars and the Mexican pesos makes that, even when people in Mexico may find the dental work expensive, for a north American it is actually inexpensive."

    This can be rewritten into clearer sentences.  Keep your sentences clear and concise.  Reread your hub aloud before you publish it.