I'd like feedback on my Hub: Hairy monster teaches life lesson to young readers

  1. chewtt2 profile image85
    chewtt2posted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Hairy monster teaches life lesson to young readers (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Chatty Chat profile image87
    Chatty Chatposted 6 months ago

    There's not enough content, and the hub is too promotional.  Basically you're just saying, "this is a great book, so go buy it on Amazon."  That's not going to fly on HubPages.

    Instead, you could write a thorough analysis of the story's plot, characters, and symbolism.  How do these things teach life lessons?  What influence does the story have on children who read it?

 
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