I'd like feedback on my Hub: You Can Be Rich

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    Chun Leeposted 9 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub You Can Be Rich (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      Will Apseposted 9 months ago in reply to this

      Your English is good but it deviates from standard American English. You will need a proofreader to get the best from the American market.

      You are pretty convincing in the thrust of your arguments, so it might be worth the small expense.

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        Chun Leeposted 9 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you for the feedback. I will try to improve my language. Thanks!

 
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