I'd like feedback on my Hub: Water:The Story of life

  1. Skian profile image82
    Skianposted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Water:The Story of life. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 8 months ago in reply to this

      Skian, this is a really interesting topic and it is easy to see that you know a lot about it. However, it seems as though you wrote it in your native language and then used a translation tool to turn it into English.

      You need to spend some time improving your written English skills. There are many websites that can help you. I found this one: http://www.englishonlinelearning.in/lea … guaes.html

      We don't want you to keep wasting your time, writing long hubs that won't be approved or featured because of poor English.