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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Sean Hannity And Rush Limbaugh, Talk Radio's Golden

  1. mio cid profile image66
    mio cidposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Sean Hannity And Rush Limbaugh, Talk Radio's Golden Boys.. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Sherry Hewins profile image94
      Sherry Hewinsposted 3 months ago in reply to this

      I think it would be easier to read if you broke it up into paragraphs. Also, you should capitalize the i to I.

      1. mio cid profile image66
        mio cidposted 3 months ago in reply to this

        This is very helpful and I will get to work on it right away.Thank you.

    2. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 3 months ago in reply to this

      As Sherry said, you need some paragraphs. I'll add to that by saying you also need sentences. It's like 'stream of consciousness' writing and is extremely hard to read. There's no sentence structure at all. Imagine someone trying to read it on a phone.

      There should always be a space after a comma, never before.

      Hope that helps.

      1. mio cid profile image66
        mio cidposted 3 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you for taking the time to read and for the valuable advice.I will make corrections.

 
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