I'd like feedback on my Hub: 2016 Most Critically Endangered Species List

  1. Annie Wright profile image78
    Annie Wrightposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 2016 Most Critically Endangered Species List. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Will Apse profile image91
    Will Apseposted 5 weeks ago

    I think the main question is: what does this page offer a reader that is hard to find elsewhere?

    There are so many authoritative sites that deal with this issue. You reference many of them.

    Also, you need to develop a more readable style. Big blocks of text make reading hard work.

    This is not meant to be damning, it takes time learn to write online. You seem to have the determination, so best of luck.

    I would look for a topic that you can bring some freshness to.

    I reckon you should also look at the learning center. This page might help:

    https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … iting-Tips