I'd like feedback on my Hub: Sex is a Mystery

  1. Ehimen Aimakhu profile image62
    Ehimen Aimakhuposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Sex is a Mystery (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. erorantes profile image34
      erorantesposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      I was reading your hub. It looks great. The topic is good. You can write an stellar hub. It is a broad subject. The organization is important because if you make it a chronological content; your readers will understand it and accept the subject. These days people are open minded. Talking about protection to be safe from any illness is essential to give an advice to younger people who do not know. I will talk about marriage first, and how important it is to create a secure family. Then, I will talk about just living together. Sex is the expectation of a couple when they love each other. You are going in a good direction.

  2. Ehimen Aimakhu profile image62
    Ehimen Aimakhuposted 2 months ago

    Thank you very much. Highly motivated

 
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