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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Seven Things to Do When Your Spouse Having An Affai

  1. khipti fatimah profile image60
    khipti fatimahposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Seven Things to Do When Your Spouse Having An Affair (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your hub hasn't been approved because of your English. There are many grammatical errors throughout the article. You could ask a fluent English speaker to help you rewrite it.

      Your images are pixelated and not credited:

      https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … -image-use
      https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … eat-Photos

      Spend some time here: https://hubpageshelp.com/

      Hope that helps.

      1. khipti fatimah profile image60
        khipti fatimahposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you for your nice information....i'd like to edit it then....Thank you...:-)

  2. Skian profile image80
    Skianposted 2 months ago

    Hi khipti,

    A lot of information in paragraph's can seem uninteresing to many readers, also english that is used in definately not upto the level. The pictures that has some watermarks are not approved by HP.

    So the suggestion would be, change the pictures replace them with better qualities also try to improvize the paragraph's by outlining the text's using bullet points.

    All the best with your first hub,
    Greetings.

    1. khipti fatimah profile image60
      khipti fatimahposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Thank you for your advice....:-)
      Hopefully I can make it better...

 
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