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I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Magnificent Seven: Are Westerns Back?

  1. Shelby Fielding profile image60
    Shelby Fieldingposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Magnificent Seven: Are Westerns Back? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi Shelby,

      The same response to your other request for feedback. You need to learn how to lay out a hub properly. Remember that people are reading your article on their mobile devices. Faced with a huge block of text they will quickly swipe back.

      https://hubpageshelp.com/

      Also remember that with movie reviews, you are competing with such sites as IMDB. You have to make your review unique and not just a boilerplate summary. Try to replace words such as 'incredible', 'amazing' and 'remarkable'. Re-read the section on 'Performances'. Those words tell the reader nothing. Try to use more descriptive phrases. http://www.theadventurouswriter.com/blo … n-writing/

      Hope that helps.

    2. Robert Sacchi profile image86
      Robert Sacchiposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      I think you did a good job of reviewing the movie.  Did you give any thought of mentioning this as being a remake in this "season of remakes"?  Do you know if the box office results for this are disappointing?  It cost $90 million to make and brought in about $35 million on the opening weekend in the U.S., according  to IMDB?

  2. calculus-geometry profile image85
    calculus-geometryposted 2 months ago

    There are lots of sentence fragments and other punctuation errors that are frequent enough to be distracting.  You can use some of those free online grammar checkers or the spell check in Word to catch most of them.

 
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