I'd like feedback on my Hub: Football Legend Roosevelt

  1. Jill Weinlein profile image86
    Jill Weinleinposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Football Legend Roosevelt "Rosey" Grier. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. calculus-geometry profile image85
      calculus-geometryposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      The hub is interesting, but it would be better to write it in the typical style of a biography rather than a numbered list.  Some of the list items are only a single sentence.  There's also a table with blank rows.

      There are also some grammatical errors and typos.  For example, you wrote "person friend" which I assume is supposed to be "personal friend." You wrote "Roses" where you meant "Rosey."  Proofread it a little more.  A second set of eyes will catch mistakes you miss.

  2. Jill Weinlein profile image86
    Jill Weinleinposted 2 months ago

    Thank you so much for your eagle eyes and suggestions. I agree 100% with what you recommended and have made the changes.

    You are terrific!

    Jill

 
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