I'd like feedback on my Hub: Violence leads to violence

  1. Stuart McIntyre profile image83
    Stuart McIntyreposted 10 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Violence leads to violence. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 10 months ago in reply to this

      Not sure about this one. I think the first half is a personal account, and HP seems to be trying to avoid these types of article - a shame in many ways. It should be on a blog perhaps? It's long enough that you could rework the general information, leaving out, or cutting down, the personal account.

      Delete that comment - it detracts from your content. Make sure you set all your hub comments to be approved, and be picky about the ones you let through.

      Put your title and sub-headings into Title Case.

      Move the video. Hubs should start with a written intro, not a video.

      Edit your photo capsules to show image attribution. Make sure images are legal to use.

      Hope that helps.

      1. Stuart McIntyre profile image83
        Stuart McIntyreposted 10 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for your feedback!

 
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