I'd like feedback on my Hub: Violence leads to violence

  1. Stuart McIntyre profile image84
    Stuart McIntyreposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Violence leads to violence. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Not sure about this one. I think the first half is a personal account, and HP seems to be trying to avoid these types of article - a shame in many ways. It should be on a blog perhaps? It's long enough that you could rework the general information, leaving out, or cutting down, the personal account.

      Delete that comment - it detracts from your content. Make sure you set all your hub comments to be approved, and be picky about the ones you let through.

      Put your title and sub-headings into Title Case.

      Move the video. Hubs should start with a written intro, not a video.

      Edit your photo capsules to show image attribution. Make sure images are legal to use.

      Hope that helps.

      1. Stuart McIntyre profile image84
        Stuart McIntyreposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for your feedback!

 
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