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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Why is The Girl Always Blamed for A Marriage Failur

  1. Neelam Ramani profile image73
    Neelam Ramaniposted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Why is The Girl Always Blamed for A Marriage Failure?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. SakinaNasir53 profile image84
      SakinaNasir53posted 8 months ago in reply to this

      Hi Neelam Ramani ,

      Your hub idea is great...just make a few changes.

      This sentence "An understanding and a sense of maturity develop" should be written as "An understanding and a sense of maturity develops"

      Arrange your hub under bullets and numbers if you can. Your hub will be easily scannable.

      Add more images that will bring quality to your hub. Also add appropriate videos if you can.
      Good luck! ☺

      1. Neelam Ramani profile image73
        Neelam Ramaniposted 8 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you so much

        1. SakinaNasir53 profile image84
          SakinaNasir53posted 8 months ago in reply to this

          You are welcome dear! ☺

 
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