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i would like feedback on my hub:

  1. Gami Rina profile image73
    Gami Rinaposted 2 months ago
    1. SakinaNasir53 profile image79
      SakinaNasir53posted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi Gami Rina, ☺
      I have read your whole hub and I found some minor errors.The content is good, but you can make it better.

      1. The title is too long. You can write it like this,
      "Is volunteering in South America cheap?"

      2. Your first sub heading is like this: "South America is a huge continent, are all the countries in it cheaper to volunteer in?"
      You can write it like this : "South America is a huge continent. Are all the countries in it cheaper to volunteer in? "

      3. Your second sub heading is like this: "Will there be extra costs that will effect my budget (besides the program fees)?"
      You can change it to "Will there be extra costs affecting my budget (besides the program fees)?"

      4. Your third sub heading is : "Is it really cheaper?"
      Change it to "Is it really cheap?"

      5. Your fourth sub heading is: "Where does the difference lay?"
      Change it to "Where does the difference lie?"

      6. "Hou to use the table" can be changed to "How to use the table? "

      7. Example number 2

      This time, I want to volunteer in Zimbabwe (Eastern Africa). according to the table, the cheapest volunteering project I could find would roughly be around 900$.
      It is According, you have written it with small a after the full stop.

      Other than that your content is good. Just make it more visually attractive. Good luck and God bless you! ☺

      1. Gami Rina profile image73
        Gami Rinaposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you so much  i really appreciate it!

        1. SakinaNasir53 profile image79
          SakinaNasir53posted 2 months ago in reply to this

          You are welcome Gami. ☺

      2. Ashish Dadgaa profile image78
        Ashish Dadgaaposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        @ Sakina,

        Very keen observation and sharp editing.

        I appreciate that smile

        1. SakinaNasir53 profile image79
          SakinaNasir53posted 8 weeks ago in reply to this

          Thank you Ashish. ☺

          1. Ashish Dadgaa profile image78
            Ashish Dadgaaposted 8 weeks ago in reply to this

            @Sakina,

            You are welcome smile

            I must say with good writing skills, you have good editing skills as well smile

            1. SakinaNasir53 profile image79
              SakinaNasir53posted 8 weeks ago in reply to this

              Thank you so much for your appreciation Ashish! ☺

              1. Ashish Dadgaa profile image78
                Ashish Dadgaaposted 8 weeks ago in reply to this

                Welcome my dear friend smile

    2. Ashish Dadgaa profile image78
      Ashish Dadgaaposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      @Gami,

      How many word counts you got? If you can add up more information and give life to your hub.

      If you can alter the opening and closing of your Hub. As you are asking a question in your title so you craft your article in such a way that you give an answer to your question at the end rather than in start.

      Follow Sakina's comments - Those are up to the mark and as per HubPage's policies.

      I hope it helps you.

      Regards,
      Ashish

 
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