I'd like feedback on my Hub: Yoga: Way to Life

  1. VandanaQueen profile image59
    VandanaQueenposted 7 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Yoga: Way to Life (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 7 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hello,

      The structure of the hub is mixed up. If you are going to number points, then they can't be mixed up. You have 'lessons' numbered, then you have facts numbered as well. It's confusing.

      There are several minor grammar issues. For example: "Most of us don't have time to focus on oneself." should be "Most of us don't have time to focus on ourselves." There are quite a few like this through the article. Pasting your text into an online app such as Grammarly may help.

      Learn what 'Title Case' is, then use throughout your hub for subheadings.

      Don't refer to your hub as a blog. It isn't - it's an article. HubPages is not a blogging platform.

      Place a legal-to-use image near the top of the page. https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … -image-use

      Use images that are relevent to the topic, i.e. yoga. Some of them are unnecessary.

      Hope that helps a little.

      1. VandanaQueen profile image59
        VandanaQueenposted 7 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thank you for reply. I will incorporate them.

 
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