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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Margarine or Butter

  1. Elsie Hagley profile image80
    Elsie Hagleyposted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Margarine or Butter. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. gerimcclym profile image86
      gerimcclymposted 6 weeks ago in reply to this

      Elsie,

      Great topic. I'm a butter person myself!

      In addition to the suggestions already made, I recommend adding more information about butter. I noticed you have substantially more info about margarine, so I would balance it out so that you have about the same amount of info for butter as you have for margarine.

      1. Elsie Hagley profile image80
        Elsie Hagleyposted 6 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thanks, will have another look and see whatI can add.

  2. India-Nepal profile image88
    India-Nepalposted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Elsie, I hope this will help.

    You should check your grammar - I've found quite a few mistakes. This distracts readers from the message you're trying to put across.

    Also, I'd delete the first sentence above the first image if I were you - it's not necessary.

    Finally, it's best to write descriptive image captions to capture further reader attention. Plus, you should properly accredit the image - even if it's your own. It looks more professional.

    I hope that helps.

    1. Elsie Hagley profile image80
      Elsie Hagleyposted 6 weeks ago in reply to this

      Thanks for responding, I will give it another try, if not successful I will delete it.
      Have a nice day.

 
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