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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Margarine or Butter

  1. Elsie Hagley profile image82
    Elsie Hagleyposted 10 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Margarine or Butter. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. gerimcclym profile image87
      gerimcclymposted 10 months ago in reply to this

      Elsie,

      Great topic. I'm a butter person myself!

      In addition to the suggestions already made, I recommend adding more information about butter. I noticed you have substantially more info about margarine, so I would balance it out so that you have about the same amount of info for butter as you have for margarine.

      1. Elsie Hagley profile image82
        Elsie Hagleyposted 10 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks, will have another look and see whatI can add.

  2. India-Nepal profile image86
    India-Nepalposted 10 months ago

    Hi Elsie, I hope this will help.

    You should check your grammar - I've found quite a few mistakes. This distracts readers from the message you're trying to put across.

    Also, I'd delete the first sentence above the first image if I were you - it's not necessary.

    Finally, it's best to write descriptive image captions to capture further reader attention. Plus, you should properly accredit the image - even if it's your own. It looks more professional.

    I hope that helps.

    1. Elsie Hagley profile image82
      Elsie Hagleyposted 10 months ago in reply to this

      Thanks for responding, I will give it another try, if not successful I will delete it.
      Have a nice day.

 
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