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I'd like feedback on my Hub: German verbs in präsens

  1. jafernandes profile image79
    jafernandesposted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub German verbs in präsens (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image92
      theraggededgeposted 6 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      While this looks like a useful hub, I think you need to work on your English language skills in order to get it approved.

      1. Watch out for capitalisation of words. Your title and sub-headings should be in 'Title Case'.

      2. "Well, learning German is far to be easy." Should be "Well, learning German is far from easy". I'd get rid of those 'well's too.

      3. Are people going to be searching for 'German verbs in prasens' or will they be looking for 'German verbs in the present tense'? The wording of your title is very important to search engines.

      4. When you use a German word as an example, put the English translation in parenthesis after it.

      5. "As I told before, the conjugation of the plural persons and the first person singular follows restrictly..." should be, "As mentioned previously, he conjugation of the plural persons and the first person singular follows the pattern..." There's no such word as 'restrictly'. It's either 'strictly', an adverb, or 'restrict', a verb.

      6. You might try running the text through an on-line grammar checker.

      PS I am in awe of your language abilities. Portuguese, German and English - I have enough trouble with English alone!

    2. claptona profile image80
      claptonaposted 6 weeks ago in reply to this

      There are writing tools on the internet that might help you with the English - I'm assuming your second language.
      The ones I use are:
      http://beta.hemingwayapp.com
      http://www.polishmywriting.com
      http://www.slickwrite.com
      Grammer, sentence structure all are covered between these 3
      Best of luck!
      Cheers
      John

      1. jafernandes profile image79
        jafernandesposted 6 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thank you

        I will use them.

        Jose

  2. jafernandes profile image79
    jafernandesposted 6 weeks ago

    Thank you theraggedege,

    I will take your advices. The evaluation system of Hubpages is strange. It would you be simpler if we knew in what aspect the hub is not suitable for publication.

 
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