I'd like feedback on my Hub: 30 years of Hillary Clinton and more?!!

  1. Seiyefa Okirika profile image40
    Seiyefa Okirikaposted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 30 years of Hillary Clinton and more?!! (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image92
      theraggededgeposted 6 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      A couple of issues with your hub:

      1. It's a personal opinion piece. Belongs on a blog. HubPages is for informative articles.
      2. It's not 'evergreen'. Meaning that as circumstances change, the content will be irrelevant unless you are willing to edit and re-edit.
      3. It's too short.
      4. It's not 'written to the title'. In other words it's not possible to condense 30 years into 150 words.

      Hope that helps.

      1. Seiyefa Okirika profile image40
        Seiyefa Okirikaposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

        tanx

 
working