I'd like feedback on my Hub: TECHNOLOGICAL INNOVATIONS IN TVET FOR JOB CREATION

  1. umudjeresunday profile image60
    umudjeresundayposted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub TECHNOLOGICAL INNOVATIONS IN TVET FOR JOB CREATION AND NATIONAL DEVELOPMENT (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image92
    FatFreddysCatposted 6 weeks ago

    Don't write your title in all caps. It comes across LIKE YOU'RE SCREAMING AT THE READER (see what I did there?)...

    The article itself seems well written enough  -- though I have to say that I honestly can't make heads or tails of it, since I am not from Nigeria and therefore I know nothing about the issues you're talking about.

    It's an absolutely massive wall of text - perhaps you can break it up a bit with some more graphics or photos.

    I'm not sure the "references" at the bottom are really necessary. This is supposed to be an article, not a term paper.

 
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