I'd like feedback on my Hub: on a bad day there is always a lipstick

  1. Preksha1003 profile image59
    Preksha1003posted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub on a bad day there is always a lipstick (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Marisa Wright profile image92
    Marisa Wrightposted 4 weeks ago

    Your Hub is the kind of thing people used to post on HubPages five or six years ago.  It's not acceptable now.

    First, it's way too short. 

    Secondly, it has two random Amazon capsules at the end.  Never put Amazon capsules at the end, never put two together, and only choose products that you can confidently recommend.  You must also say why you recommend them (you can do that in the Description section of the Amazon capsule). 

    Thirdly, your title needs work.  At school you may have learned to use catchy titles - that doesn't work online,  Your title must tell Google what your Hub is about.

    1. Preksha1003 profile image59
      Preksha1003posted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      Ok I will work on it

 
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