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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Expectations from a Wife

  1. devivijji profile image60
    devivijjiposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Expectations from a Wife (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      I am soooo glad I don't live in India! Sounds like a nightmare. I make mine sleep in the attic.

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image93
    FatFreddysCatposted 3 weeks ago

    Waaaaayyy too short. HubPages is a place to write articles, not brief paragraphs.

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 3 weeks ago

    The Hub is too short, and there are grammar issues, particularly the absence in many cases of the definite and indefinite articles.

    Check that Learning Center https://hubpageshelp.com/ to find out what it is that HubPages wants in submissions.

  4. Janellegems profile image45
    Janellegemsposted 3 weeks ago

    I agree with the other hubbers that it is too short.  Maybe you can continue to write about three more paragraphs on this topic and use some of the capsules on the right of the hub, click on video and add a youtube video on expectations from the wife.  You can add quotes about marital expectations from other authors.  Make it unique and creative.

    1. devivijji profile image60
      devivijjiposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Thank you very much for the feedback. It really helped me.

 
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