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I'd like feedback on my Hub: 8 Things you will need to understand about motherho

  1. Wade Rowe profile image61
    Wade Roweposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 8 Things you will need to understand about motherhood and Depression (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 weeks ago

    Some issues

    Your title is too long and should be in Title Face. I was always taught never to start a sentence with a number, but that rule may have changed since the days of manual typewriters, or, in my case, quill pens.

    There are some grammar/style problems:

    . let us address whether or not your issue is critical? Should start with a capital letter

    Just keep in mind you've got a large amount of bodily hormones and feelings dashing about your system presently - presently means "in the future," you should use "at present"

    The tiny azure emotions - when someone refers to having the blues it doesn't reference a colour so the substitution of azure is inappropriate.

    checklist down below  - down is redundant, below is down.

    There are other similar errors that need to be fixed. Try running your article through a program such as Grammarly.

    Your image need to be credited and they should be licensed for use through Creative Commons.

  3. Wade Rowe profile image61
    Wade Roweposted 2 weeks ago

    Thanks

      i will publish my work somewhere else. Good luck Hubpages.

    1. theraggededge profile image93
      theraggededgeposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Was that a flounce out the door?

      1. calculus-geometry profile image87
        calculus-geometryposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

        I'm getting a whiff of imortalone...

  4. Wade Rowe profile image61
    Wade Roweposted 2 weeks ago

    No just butt-hurt like crazy.

    I will make the corrections necessary

  5. daydreams profile image92
    daydreamsposted 2 weeks ago

    You have also repeated the same content twice about steps when to seek your doctor's advice.

  6. Wade Rowe profile image61
    Wade Roweposted 2 weeks ago

    thanks
    Got it

 
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