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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Revelation Chapter Twelve

  1. The0NatureBoy profile image67
    The0NatureBoyposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Revelation Chapter Twelve (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    Elijah A "NatureBoy" Alexander, Jr.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image93
    Rupert Taylorposted 3 weeks ago

    Sorry Elijah but I find your article to be rambling and mostly incoherent. The huge blocks of type, overuse of boldface, and grammar errors won't help it pass Quality Assessment.

    1. FatFreddysCat profile image92
      FatFreddysCatposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      ^^ Yep, what Rupert said.

  3. The0NatureBoy profile image67
    The0NatureBoyposted 3 weeks ago

    Thanks Rupert and Fat, I'll see about making those changes.

 
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