Hi everyone. Would really value your feedback.

  1. threekeys profile image82
    threekeysposted 3 weeks ago

    Could you give me constructive advice about my poem called "we are the agent for change" so that it meets the requirements/standards for being published. I have no idea why it wasn't acceptable. Thank you in advance for your time and energy.http://hubpages.com/literature/We-Are-the-Agent-for-Change

    1. SmartAndFun profile image91
      SmartAndFunposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Your link isn't live. You need to go back and find the email HP sent you, informing you that the poem needs improvement before being published. If you follow the instructions in that email, a live link will be posted here in the forums and we will be able to click through to read your poem.

  2. threekeys profile image82
    threekeysposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi appreciate your time and interest for giving me feedback smartandfun. I have now chosen to remove the poem. It is a perspective on Aussie (australian) culture/society that perhaps is not appropriate or relevant here. Anyway, I think i will just keep it for my book of poetry which is going to be ecclectic in its nature. Cheers!

 
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