I'd like feedback on my Hub: Victim Blaming

  1. steve-bc-ca profile image82
    steve-bc-caposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Victim Blaming. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. calculus-geometry profile image87
      calculus-geometryposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      First of all, I'm very glad that your son and mother pulled through.

      The main issues I see are some typos and the link to soundcloud.  HP gets stricter and stricter about links all the time and I always suggest to write articles without any links at first, and then go back and add them after the article has cleared.  If you add links one at a time you can figure out which one(s) might be the breaking point.

      The typos you can clean up easily with a grammar checker and by reading it out loud one word at a time.

      1. steve-bc-ca profile image82
        steve-bc-caposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thanks calculus for the help. I found some typos and managed to get the hub featured.

 
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